HAIKU: Parking Lot

there's danger in this
parking lot: where the caverns
gobble up our feet.

6 comments:

  1. "the parking lot had an element of danger," no?

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  2. "As / giants. / On their
    shoulders. / Scouring / out the / great lands,

    pink and / unknown."

    ...no?

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  3. I'm talking "The Trapeze Swinger" lyrics.

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  4. I know. I'm merely pointing out that you have also manipulated lyrics in your poems as well.

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  5. Well, sure! It's funny though because I was listening to that song a few days ago and that line in particular stood out to me so much that I wrote that line as a draft in Blogger! Strange!

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  6. Strange indeed. Just remember: I have funeral dibs on that song, so don't go writin' no death poems 'bout it, y'hear?

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